he spends 6 or 7 pages on ultra-descriptive things about what somebody is wearingI just reread the first chapter️ ↗: no "ultra-descriptive things about what somebody is wearing" at all. And if you are writing realistic prose, what people are wearing is important, and in the nineteenth century even more than in the twenty-first; it's no coincidence that two key works of 19th century literature are Gottfried Keller's Kleider machen Leute and Nikolay Gogol's ШинелÑ. Movies tend to get this wrong; I remember a relatively recent film version of Anna Karenina where one reviewer noticed that the clothes belonged to the wrong time (the 1890s rather than the 1860s) and the wrong social set.
Btw, the version of ÐеÑÑ I cited above reproduces a printed version where the text of the novel runs to about 660 pages; another (old-spelling) version has about 580 pages. Either the translation is way too wordy, or the printer is wasting paper.
You remind me of André Gide rejecting Proust's Recherche.
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Posted by Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-January-30 10:38:56 EST, Saturday
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- Actually, you're right. - Eeyore on 2021-February-02 06:00:15 EST, Tuesday - (10 / 0 / 5)
- Chekhov novel? - Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-February-02 15:07:21 EST, Tuesday - (9 / 0 / 4)
- "meaning" - Eeyore on 2021-February-04 04:15:11 EST, Thursday - (8 / 0 / 2)
- Ohh? 24 hours without reply? Let me rub things in. - Eeyore on 2021-February-05 04:20:50 EST, Friday - (9 / 0 / 1)
- Nah... - Hajduk on 2021-February-05 18:16:49 EST, Friday - (8 / 0 / 0)
- Ohh? 24 hours without reply? Let me rub things in. - Eeyore on 2021-February-05 04:20:50 EST, Friday - (9 / 0 / 1)
- Cowboy novel? That's how I first read the title... - griffith on 2021-February-02 18:13:10 EST, Tuesday - (9 / 0 / 0)
- "meaning" - Eeyore on 2021-February-04 04:15:11 EST, Thursday - (8 / 0 / 2)
- Chekhov novel? - Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-February-02 15:07:21 EST, Tuesday - (9 / 0 / 4)
- sorry, my version is only.. - Eeyore on 2021-January-31 05:03:49 EST, Sunday - (9 / 0 / 5)
- underlying hostilities? - no -nt- - Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-January-31 15:33:44 EST, Sunday - (9 / 0 / 0)
- Upon Further Inspection: 710 pages. - Eeyore on 2021-January-31 05:22:13 EST, Sunday - (9 / 0 / 3)
- (Excludes End Notes, etc.) (nt) - Eeyore on 2021-January-31 05:25:42 EST, Sunday - (9 / 0 / 2)
- Does it include... - Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-February-01 13:51:02 EST, Monday - (10 / 0 / 1)
- I honestly don't know anything about that. - Eeyore on 2021-February-04 04:53:42 EST, Thursday - (9 / 0 / 0)
- Does it include... - Tyrone Slothrop on 2021-February-01 13:51:02 EST, Monday - (10 / 0 / 1)
- (Excludes End Notes, etc.) (nt) - Eeyore on 2021-January-31 05:25:42 EST, Sunday - (9 / 0 / 2)
- With all respect, if... - Plyushkin on 2021-January-30 11:37:55 EST, Saturday - (9 / 0 / 0)