One error in your claims: repeated studies show that somewhere between 20% and 32% of men are attracted to prepubescent girls at least as much as to women - which is to say, not 1 in 10 but somewhere between 1 in 5 and 1 in 3. If we are counting men who are sometimes attracted to children, the number is not 1 in 10 but 9 in 10.

We might quibble about how best to word things, but otherwise you are pretty much right.