Nah, he doesn't look upset at all. But just to please His Highness, I shall rewrite.
Original version (with a slight variation):





An Ode to Eros



an ode to eros is not difficult to write

but the words may disappear in the sound



a bumblebee forever blessed by the tetrachord delivers an unfinished message



a hummingbird hovers above the sky, deleting its passage



electricity, in the round, does not travel through gears

And Eros is an entity of not many words, and even fewer years