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Grammatical Corrections

Posted by Lateralus on 2010-June-14 22:11:17 EDT, Monday
In reply to Re: Wow! posted by Lateralus on 2010-June-14 22:05:33 EDT, Monday

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To extent it is selfish of me to want to be with them, but it's no selfish for all of you to want to be here.

Should read:

To an extent it is selfish of me to want to be with them, but it's no less selfish for all of you to want to be here.

That makes a traitor in some people's eyes

Should read:

That makes me a traitor in some people's eyes


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